Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Storytelling Week 11: The Lucky Lion

The Lucky Lion
John Lion was a focused man. He was focused on his job more than anything else. This was because Mr. Lion had just received a promotion. He was the new manager of The Rainforest Café. He held many different titles within the restaurant over many years, but this was the chance he had been waiting for all along. Mr. Lion knew this day would come, he just did not know when. No matter the timing, John Lion was extremely thankful for the opportunity and responsibility of running his own restaurant.

As a young boy working in the kitchen, all the way until be made is way out on to the dining room floor, he watched the managers run the place as if it were a piece of cake. Mr. Lion was looking forward to that moment.

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It was Mr. Lion’s first night on the floor as the manager. He arrived at work early to make sure everyone would run smoothly. Unfortunately, he had more issues than he could have ever imagined. After going into the kitchen, he realized the dishwasher was broke and two of his cooks were late. He wanted to make sure no one thought he could not handle it so he started helping out back there. Before he knew it, orders were flying in! However, another speed bump stopped Mr. Lion once again. Servers were coming into the kitchen panicked because not all of the serving staff had arrived. This put some pressure on Mr. Lion, but once again, he wanted everyone to think he had it under control. Therefore, Mr. Lion went out on to the dining room floor and began helping the servers.

After a little bit of time spent helping the servers he took a step back and looked around at his fully functioning restaurant. It was in that moment that he realized he was really in charge. The biggest thing Mr. Lion learned that night was that even though he was the boss, there might be times when he needs to wash the dishes or help cook or even help serve. He discovered that becoming the manager did not give him a new title or a new job. Becoming the manager meant that he now had a little piece of every title and every job through out the restaurant. That no matter where the weak spot may be, he could help strengthen it again.





(Photo taken from WikiMedia Commons)


Author’s Note:
I have worked in many restaurants throughout my life, and for some reason as I was reading  different fables from the section Lions in Aesop’s Fables, all I could imagine were those crazy jungle-like nights. I have watched many managers, who are a lot like the king of the jungle in a restaurant, succeed like the lions did in some fables. However, I have also seen the exact opposite, where the managers have need our help much like the lion needed the help of other animals in some fables.
For this story, I combined a lot of different fables from the section Lions in Aesop’s Fables. Sometimes the lion was king of the jungle, and other times he needed his fellow animals to help him out. To me it seemed as if the lion was like a real person, perhaps like a boss. Usually a boss is someone who runs the place most of the time, but of course, there are some times that he or she could use a little help from his other workers. I decided to name my main character John Lion because he may not be an actual lion in the jungle, but he is the king of his jungle.

Bibliography:
Aesop’s Fables: Lions
Fables and Satires
Sir Brooke Boothby (1809)

7 comments:

  1. Hey Molly! I really enjoyed your story this week. As a fellow former server I can definitely relate. I used to work at Red Robin and a jungle is a perfect way to describe it. I think you did a great job translating the original stories into a current setting that was very relatable. Good job, and I look forward to reading more of your stories!

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  2. This was such an interesting story to read. I liked how you connected Lions being the king in the jungle to being the king in a restaurant. It was also nice how you were able to tell us how becoming a king or a manager comes with added responsibilities. One thing I found to be a little confusing was the first sentence of the second paragraph. But other than that, everything else was great!

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  3. I really enjoyed your realistic story! I could see how working in a restaurant and taking a step back to evaluate your situation would compare to the jungle. I thought you showed a lot of creativity in writing the story and using the man’s name as Mr. Lion.
    The only mistake I found was I think you meant “to make sure everything would run smoothly.”
    Nice work!

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  4. hey Molly!

    I really liked you story. That moment of realization that the lion has is really eye opening because some times i feel like people think that because they are at the top mean that they will not have as much work when in reality that could not be farther from the truth. keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your work

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  5. Hi Molly,
    I really liked the tone of your story. It really captured the essence of an Aesop story. I thought it was a cool little note to include the Rainforest Café. You did a good job of keeping the story engaging, and it flowed really easily. It was a really light and encouraging story. You also did a good job of maintaining the moral of the story.

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  6. Hi Molly!

    I really enjoyed your story! I have never worked in a restaurant, but I have seen a lot of crazy nights at the ones I have dined at and heard the horror stories from my mom and friends. I work in an office where we deal with craziness like that all the time. It does seem like a jungle when things don't go right! I like how you made this story relatable! Great job!!!

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  7. Hey, again, Molly! Some thoughts as I read your latest storytelling:

    • Aw, I love the Rainforest Café! I have been in years...
    • I’m so excited for Mr. Lion – I hope he does well!

    Oh, it’s over already! This is great because it’s short and sweet and yet still paints a very compelling story! I enjoyed how you pulled in all of the difference facets of the Lion character from Aesop’s fables!

    You’re one of the few people in the class that has, with this story at least, built upon a story without having to re-tell it. A lot of the others seem to be looking at only the story they have to retell, instead of thinking about what they can do with the characters themselves.

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