Life Like a Hawk
One day John wonders into the woods to take a break from the physical labor. He just wanted to explore and look around. He noticed a lonely raven sitting in a nest. John stood there quietly waiting for the ravens family to return. Ten minutes goes by, then twenty, and finally John begins to leave the woods. Right at that very moment, a giant hawk swoops past John’s head and flies up to the raven. Next thing he knows the hawk is feeding the raven. Seeing that happen made John angry. He felt as if he was the Hawk, big and strong and always doing for others. HE decided right then that he was no longer going to be the hawk, he was going to be the raven and have others take care of him.
The first day of his lifestyle change went well. John’s mother took very good care of him. After an entire week of no work, and less food, John started noticing some dramatic changes. He was no longer strong, he did not eat as much as he used to, and he did not have the energy he once did. That is when John started to regret his decision.
Slowly but surely, John started to live his hawk-like life again. As he did so, he decided to truly believe in his heart and in his mind that the life of a Raven is not all that it is cracked up to be. Being taken care of all day can be good on rare occasions, but his true calling was to be a hawk. He was meant to be strong and work hard.
(Drawing of a hawk taken from WikiMedia Commons) |
Author's Note: Rather than change this story, I just wanted to add to it. The original story talks of a random kid who sees a hawk that is feeding raven and assumes that the life of a raven is ideal. He then learns that the life of a hawk is actually better. I simply wanted to give background on the kid as to why he was so envious of the raven and add to his rational of why he realizes a hawks life is better.
Bibliography:
The Youth, the Hawk, and the Raven
The Tortoise and the Geese and Other Fables of Bidpai
Maude Barrows Dutton
1908
Hi Molly,
ReplyDeleteYour ability to expand on the story but not lose the meaning of it was really well done. I quite like background information on characters. I always wonder what motivates their actions. I think the story flowed really well too. You did a really good job on this! I look forward to reading more from your blog this semester.
It was really cool how you expanded on the story and added more background to the young boy. I could relate to him since my family used to have a farm too. This was a much deeper connection to the story since you added a name to the boy unlike the original story which seemed much less interesting. Great work, I enjoyed reading it! Hope to read more of your stories this semester!
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